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高考英語滿分作文

作者：鈞墨

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告示:高考結束，進度恢複！十月選考卷英語作文篇後續補上:（英語考試改革後，對英語作文題目産生的巨大腦(hei)洞，彙集成冊，名曰《高考英語滿分作文》。以此文獻給羽羽姐，gre和托福滿分！╭(╯ε╰)╮浙江的小夥伴可看，其他省的小夥伴也可看，基本是讀後續寫的腦洞，摻雜一點語文考試閱讀題改編版，會附上原文=w=

內容标簽： 奇幻魔幻 花季雨季 勵志人生

搜索關鍵字：主角：Holly，I，Susan ┃ 配角： ┃ 其它：高考英語

魔毯

（2016寧波十校聯考）閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。

Holly was confused as she opened the birthday present from her friend, Susan – it was a twelve-by-eighteen-inch dark blue carpet. Her “thanks” was hardly heard as Holly tried hard not to show her disappointment.

The next morning, I carried a kitchen rubbish bag outside only to find Susan’s carpet lying there. I reached in and pulled it out of the can. After giving it brushing, I brought it into the house and put it away.

Before Holly’s birthday, Susan had been a regular visitor in our home. But I realized it had been nearly three weeks since we’d even heard the mention of Susan’s name. I missed her warm smile and eager-to-please ways.

“Susan invited me toe over to her house after school tomorrow.” Holly announced as she put her books down on the kitchen table. Although her voice carried a so-what attitude, I sensed she was pleased by the invitation.

We were travelling along the winding country road that led to her house the following day. On the way Susan talked nervously about her foster mother and the seventeen cats they had taken in and cared for.

When we came to a stop, Susan’s foster mother- who introduced herself as Glenda- gave us a warm wee.

I followed Susan’s foster mom, Glenda, into the kitchen. After clearing a small area, Glenda poured us each a cup of black coffee with trembling hand. Then she began to relax as we drank our coffee and chatted about her cats.

Her eyes shone as she showed her fondness for Susan. But her expression turned blue when she referred briefly to the girl’s past. In a short time, I came to respect this generous-hearted woman who had opened her home to a young girl and attempted to make a difference in her life.

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續寫部分：

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As daylight began to fade, we offered our thanks for the visit and said good-bye.

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“Is this what you were looking for”

______________________________--I placed the piece of carpet on the table in front of her. “Thanks, Mom.” A tear or two slipped from her eyes and splashed onto the dark blue carpet that, as if by magic, had be the most precious birthday present in the whole world.

人物介紹：

Holly-霍莉 I-霍艾（本文設定為Holly的妹妹） Susan-蘇思安（本文設定為暗戀Holly的同學）

魔毯

7月3日。

霍家日歷上畫了一個五角星，霍艾還特地畫了一個壽星戴的帽子。

是霍莉的生日。

霍莉和霍艾是一對姐妹，如果不是她們容貌上的相似，很少有人能想到她們竟然是親生姐妹。

霍莉，外表豔麗性格外向，多才多藝成績又好，是老師的寵兒，校內的風雲人物，而霍艾患有腿疾，連站立都是一種奢望。正因此，她從小就在家中，由父母聘請的家庭教師授課，性格相對內斂。

如果說霍莉在五官上有什麽最為出彩的地方，那一定是她斜斜飛揚的長眉。這樣一雙眉毛放在任何人臉上，都會立刻體現出所有者高傲的神采。

但相似的放在霍艾臉上，卻因為她習慣性低眉的神态顯得冷淡。

霍莉的生日恰好在期末考試之後，臨近放假，學業壓力暫時減輕了，同學們收到霍家的生日派對請柬，都或多或少表現出興奮的情緒。使得本該愁雲慘淡的最後分析試卷的兩天上課都過得像節日一樣熱烈。

生日聚會果然像所有人預料的那樣非常精彩，霍家租賃的一個小型體育場在當日晚上八點到十點對所有持有派對請柬的來賓開放，拉花和彩燈裝點下，歌聲、嬉笑聲久久不歇。

霍莉收到很多禮物，聚會結束後，她坐在客廳中拆開精美的包裝盒，一邊向妹妹展示她的所得。

直到拆到其中一份禮物的時候，她微微停頓了一下。

又扁又平的紙盒毫無裝飾，在一堆五顏六色帶着蝴